Relating With a Book Character

A big writing project this quarter after reading the book "Bringing the Boy Home" was to write a two voice poem.  Throughout this project I have realized that I am a strong writer in terms of voice, ideas, organization, and word choice.  I still need to work on sentence fluency, conventions and presentation.  I think that I did good job at comparing my life with the character's.  I was able to show not tell, as did I use figurative language.  Revising helped me recognize spelling errors, add figurative language, take away un-needed information and add in information.  I think maybe I could take away extra information.